My first star for you is that i really liked how you stated witch part in the story when you said something. My second star for you is that i liked how you almost told the whole entire story in only like 5 minutes. My wish is just if you would have put some expression in what you were saying. sincerely Grace
i love the details and that you put the such a small thing but made it a big one
ReplyDeleteMy first star for you is that i really liked how you stated witch part in the story when you said something.
ReplyDeleteMy second star for you is that i liked how you almost told the whole entire story in only like 5 minutes.
My wish is just if you would have put some expression in what you were saying.
sincerely Grace
I like how strong your universal truth was at the beginning.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added things like "the world stabs you in the back in least expected ways
ReplyDeleteIn your intro [sorry forgot to say it in the first comment
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